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  • darknessfall

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    you are an amazing writer i'm so happy that you updated because reading is my other escape
    September 9th, 2014 at 04:39am
  • WretchedAndDivine

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    Glad to see you're updating again. Don't let people get you down just cause they don't seem to like it. If they don't like it they can keep their comments to themselves and go else where. I like your story the way it is.
    September 8th, 2014 at 03:38am
  • darknessfall

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    omfg this is a beautiful story it really is would love if u can update . yous story should be turned into a book
    September 6th, 2014 at 02:38pm
  • Siren1339

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    @ Dixon-Darling.
    I was thinking the same thing
    August 20th, 2014 at 08:51pm
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    @ Dixon-Darling.
    I was thinking the same thing
    August 20th, 2014 at 08:50pm
  • WretchedAndDivine

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    I miss you!!! Come Back!!!!
    July 25th, 2014 at 02:27am
  • BrookieCookie490

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    I loved the update! I can't wait to see what happens while they're in NYC. Post more soon!
    July 9th, 2014 at 07:54pm
  • Dixon-Darling.

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    I'm sorry but this is almost a photo-copy of 50 Shades of Grey... It would be nice to see something new.
    July 6th, 2014 at 01:45am
  • WretchedAndDivine

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    I'm ready for face melting chapters! I'm looking forward to see how they do in New York together!
    July 5th, 2014 at 11:20pm
  • WretchedAndDivine

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    I really liked that chapter. I liked how Carter didn't say anything when his father made that toast about her changing the light in his eyes!
    July 1st, 2014 at 06:01am
  • emo_vamp210

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    i really love your storie more and more. I think its cute how he is with her Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green
    July 1st, 2014 at 03:30am
  • emo_vamp210

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    Awww there first fight face to face. I really love it and I'm sorry bout your grandma. I hope you and your family are all ok.
    June 27th, 2014 at 06:10am
  • simply amanda;

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    I love this!
    June 20th, 2014 at 03:19pm
  • WretchedAndDivine

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    Oh shoot.. she said the L word! I'm surprised he didn't flip shit! I absolutely love your updates! One thing I will say is maybe trying to make the chapters a little longer if possible?
    June 20th, 2014 at 05:11am
  • emo_vamp210

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    Awwwwww plz update soon. I really love it
    June 20th, 2014 at 02:59am
  • BrookieCookie490

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    I really love the story and the latest chapter. I can't wait to see what happens between these two. Post more soon!
    June 20th, 2014 at 02:59am
  • emo_vamp210

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    Lol she thought she was going home with him. I love how she was talking about the girl he thought she was talking to him and tells her he doesn't suck but she can do that. Smile update more plz and thank you. You are really good at writing keep it up. Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green
    June 19th, 2014 at 04:04am
  • emo_vamp210

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    Lol she thought she was going home with him. I love how she was talking about the girl he thought she was talking to him and tells her he doesn't suck but she can do that. Smile update more plz and thank you. You are really good at writing keep it up. Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green
    June 19th, 2014 at 04:03am
  • emo_vamp210

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    WHY TAKE THE EX???? I hope they syay together plz update want to read more!!!!!!!! Smile Smile Smile Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green
    June 14th, 2014 at 03:33am
  • emo_vamp210

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    WHY TAKE THE EX???? I hope they syay together plz update want to read more!!!!!!!! Smile Smile Smile Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green
    June 14th, 2014 at 03:33am
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