Heart's Desire - Comments

you are an amazing writer i'm so happy that you updated because reading is my other escape

Glad to see you're updating again. Don't let people get you down just cause they don't seem to like it. If they don't like it they can keep their comments to themselves and go else where. I like your story the way it is.

omfg this is a beautiful story it really is would love if u can update . yous story should be turned into a book

@ Dixon-Darling.
I was thinking the same thing

@ Dixon-Darling.
I was thinking the same thing

I miss you!!! Come Back!!!!

I loved the update! I can't wait to see what happens while they're in NYC. Post more soon!

I'm sorry but this is almost a photo-copy of 50 Shades of Grey... It would be nice to see something new.

I'm ready for face melting chapters! I'm looking forward to see how they do in New York together!

I really liked that chapter. I liked how Carter didn't say anything when his father made that toast about her changing the light in his eyes!

i really love your storie more and more. I think its cute how he is with her

Awww there first fight face to face. I really love it and I'm sorry bout your grandma. I hope you and your family are all ok.

I love this!

Oh shoot.. she said the L word! I'm surprised he didn't flip shit! I absolutely love your updates! One thing I will say is maybe trying to make the chapters a little longer if possible?

Awwwwww plz update soon. I really love it

I really love the story and the latest chapter. I can't wait to see what happens between these two. Post more soon!

Lol she thought she was going home with him. I love how she was talking about the girl he thought she was talking to him and tells her he doesn't suck but she can do that. update more plz and thank you. You are really good at writing keep it up.

Lol she thought she was going home with him. I love how she was talking about the girl he thought she was talking to him and tells her he doesn't suck but she can do that. update more plz and thank you. You are really good at writing keep it up.

WHY TAKE THE EX???? I hope they syay together plz update want to read more!!!!!!!!

WHY TAKE THE EX???? I hope they syay together plz update want to read more!!!!!!!!