I can't find anything wrong with this, not at all. It's wonderful so far, and as the person below me mentioned, longer chapters would be cool, but I like this the way it is, as well. It works perfectly with the story, and longer chapters would give us more of your lovely writing to enjoy, but hey, however you would like to write it. c: It's wonderful so far, and everything just works and I have reread these couple of chapters repeatedly now.
This is absolutely amazing and I'm in love, absolute love. I can't criticize anything or even offer any suggestions because there's nothing to fix, it's just beautiful all the way around.
I'd like to see a longer chapter, I think you're a good writer but it's hard to judge with little drabbles. I wanna know why Gabe is doing this ughhhh. More soon? :)
This is absolutely amazing and I'm in love, absolute love. I can't criticize anything or even offer any suggestions because there's nothing to fix, it's just beautiful all the way around.