The Untouchables - Comments

Loved the chapter, I like seeing the boys stick up for themselves. Great update, I look forward to the next!

Please update, it's getting interesting and I can't wait for the next bit!

Great story so far, love!! <3
x Vinyl Suicide

Hope there will be an update soon. I'm missing this story.

@ Lyra
Thanks!

@ baysway
Thank you so much!!

I just read this, and I love it! Great characters, great writing, and I can't wait until you update!

I do not understand why I am the only one commenting! This is a great story! Excellent updates, as usual.

Really enjoyed the update. Frank is absolutely adorable. I never thought about the handshake thing before, but you are totally right! Can't wait for more.

This is off to a great start. I love stories about the guys when they are in high school. Frank's character seems exactly as I would imagine him to be back then.

I hope I am not out of line by saying this, but it would be great if you could separate the paragraphs in the future. A lot of writers on here don't put spaces between them and it makes it really hard to read. Everything runs together and if you glance away from the screen, it can be a pain to find where you left off. Just a request.

I look forward to more updates!