How I Loved Him. - Comments

I really like this. I love the dialogue cause it feels real, the way people really would talk. I liked that in the introduction the roommate immediatley says; She's single haha. It's something my friends would do (if I actually were single)

Charlie seems like a nice guys... but he's a killer, thats always in the back of my mind while reading.

Overall good story. keep going!

I really like this. I love the dialogue cause it feels real, the way people really would talk. I liked that in the introduction the roommate immediatley says; She's single haha. It's something my friends would do (if I actually were single)

Charlie seems like a nice guys... but he's a killer, thats always in the back of my mind while reading.

Overall good story. keep going!

I really like this. I love the dialogue cause it feels real, the way people really would talk. I liked that in the introduction the roommate immediatley says; She's single haha. It's something my friends would do (if I actually were single)

Charlie seems like a nice guys... but he's a killer, thats always in the back of my mind while reading.

Overall good story. keep going!

I was really drawn in by the summary. I thought the first paragraph was really cute, then I read the last sentence and it totally surprised me.  The twist made me want to find out more.

My feelings towards Charlie changed a lot as I read through this. He seemed okay at first, then I thought he was really creepy. I really didn't like him at the end of chapter 5 because I thought he was going to do something to Jane but then I read the next chapter and saw that he was just looking out for her. I don't know how I feel about him because from what you've shown us so far he seems like a nice guy but obviously if he is a killer then that's not the case. 

I'm so eager to find out the story behind the bloody shirt. Also it made me giggle how Jane was worried about ruining her bunny slippers

I did spot a few spelling and grammar mistakes but apart from that I think this story is quite good and I'm interested to see how things play out so I'm definitely subscribing

Love your story

I loved the twist in the summary!

Hush your face hole I'm laughing so hard hahaha. The first chapter is great, it really hooked me in and that comedy. great, loved it!

Rose had went to a party should be gone to a party. :)

I really loved this, the whole feel to this, the humour, everything! This is a great story! Kudos

Oh dear, I love this story already! Please update soon! :D

Hello! Sorry this took so long but I'm here now :)

So far this story seems really cute. It is a tad fast-paced, but I'm sure more details are coming along in the future chapters.

I really like how poetic the summary sounds. It caught my interest right away and then the last sentence sent chills up my spine! I'm very excited to see what that means!

I'm already loving the dialogue and the action between the characters. Rose and Jane are already on my good list. We'll see about Charlie soon (although the end of chapter two was kind of creepy).

A tiny suggestion I have is to look for some grammar mistakes. There are a lot of instances where you should have a period but put a comma instead. Other than that you're great! :D

I'm subscribing! :D