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Thatmom (100)

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I like it so far:)

May 7th, 2014 at 10:27pm
ilovehockey4952 (100)

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You have a nice beginning but, you might consider working with a beta. There are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors and it is a bit hard to follow at times. A beta can really help with that. Good luck and keep going!

April 30th, 2014 at 06:29pm

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