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  • Thatmom

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    I like it so far:)
    May 7th, 2014 at 10:27pm
  • ilovehockey4952

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    You have a nice beginning but, you might consider working with a beta. There are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors and it is a bit hard to follow at times. A beta can really help with that. Good luck and keep going!
    April 30th, 2014 at 06:29pm
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