Bound by the Heart - Comments

@ ShadowCorpus
Good idea, take Shrewsbury's point of view. Maybe thinking back to before the marriage discussions? :) I like that idea!

I like it so far =) I think the diction works well for the time period. I think for the next chapter it should maybe give some backstory to the protagonist or her father? Maybe switch point of view to the father? Good start though X)