Mother Sea - Comments

This is amazing, I've only read a few mermaid stories on here before but this takes the cake. I love the description in the first chapter, your layout is amazing as well and that gif is perfect!

I really enjoyed how the starting line connected with the ending line, I thought that was really clever!

You described my favourite types of mermaids and I can't wait to see where you take this story! Good job!

I think you have produced the image of a mermaid perfectly. This beautiful, melodic creature that is just a monster hidden. I really like the beginning of this piece because it seems to piece with the end, like it starts with what is happening in the present then delves into the back story of how he got involved with the siren, and then it goes back into the present, when he notices her teeth. I love how you left it off there because we all know what will ultimately happen, unfortunately.

I love the way this is written and it flows really well. The writing is haunting as well. Great job with this piece. c:

This is, and I have tried to think of a good way to describe this, but the only way I can is as amazing. This is honestly one of the best pieces I have EVER read on Mibba. Your layout is gorgeous, the gif is just beautiful, and the eeriness of the background and the almost sinisterness of the whole layout tieing together made this ever more exciting to read.
The way you play this story out, gosh, you have talent. I'll tell you that much. The opening paragraph had me hooked, there was no turning back.

''But there was something about her. Something that unsettled him. '' I've fallen in love with that line, for some reason. It makes me feel about her as if she is some kind of creature that captures her pray in the most deceiving of ways, which she seem to do. The way she is portrayed as an angle, but in actual fact a demon in disguise, only he is too blind to see it. I loved this, definitely recommending.

This was truly brilliant. Such a great use of imagery and choice words. It's also superbly creepy and freaky and wow. I really have no words to describe this but brilliant, amazing, beautiful, wonderful, haunting, and wow. Yes, wow. This is possibly one of my favorite one shots on here. My favorite part was how you described the scales of her tail looking like diamonds. I could see this story playing out in my head and wow. I know, I keep saying wow but I just don't know what other words to describe it; because it is truly amazing and wonderful and ugh. I love it, from beginning to end. Recommended, for sure.

I truly loved this one shot. It's short and sweet and directly to the point. I love the mesmerizing way you write about the mer-creature. It is everything I would expect from something that would seem so sweet, only to have her turn out far more sinister than she appeared. This was a beauty in and of its own accord. I loved it down to the very last word.