I Want Our Love to Surround You - Comments

I miss this story

I'm loving this story!

LOVED IT A LOT. YOU ROCK

"some kind of smooth James Dean kind of feel"
Exactly! Everytime I listen to "blue jeans" it reminds me of John.

"Her mind did that automatic ‘cute boy’ shut down and she became rigid"
My mind does the same thing :/

“You’re obviously a little busy /John/, come talk to me when you’re free.”
WOOOOOOOOOOW You go, girl.

I love sponsor girl already.

Just a little of constructive criticism: I didn't understand The 25th June after 17th June as her 1st day of work, that was a flashback? I'm a little confused with how time goes on this story.

So great! Keep up the good work! :)

So great! Keep up the good work! :)

This is so good can't wait to read more