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  • everdeen

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    I miss this story
    April 9th, 2015 at 04:16am
  • Lils52889

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    I'm loving this story!
    August 30th, 2014 at 07:02pm
  • Niallerislife

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    LOVED IT A LOT. YOU ROCK
    June 22nd, 2014 at 09:04am
  • everdeen

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    "some kind of smooth James Dean kind of feel"
    Exactly! Everytime I listen to "blue jeans" it reminds me of John.

    "Her mind did that automatic ‘cute boy’ shut down and she became rigid"
    My mind does the same thing :/

    “You’re obviously a little busy /John/, come talk to me when you’re free.”
    WOOOOOOOOOOW You go, girl.

    I love sponsor girl already.

    Just a little of constructive criticism: I didn't understand The 25th June after 17th June as her 1st day of work, that was a flashback? I'm a little confused with how time goes on this story.
    June 18th, 2014 at 05:19pm
  • sofi

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    So great! Keep up the good work! :)
    June 16th, 2014 at 12:45am
  • sofi

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    So great! Keep up the good work! :)
    June 16th, 2014 at 12:45am
  • shanemeatsix

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    This is so good can't wait to read more Very Happy
    June 2nd, 2014 at 05:36pm
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