Needles Made of Ash - Comments

  • narutogirl1994

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    @ NauticalNonsense;;
    Thank you so much! Originally this piece was for a contest a while ago and kinda was collecting dust in a folder on my computer. But my mother also was really similar to this woman just kinda without the sex, but I took the feelings of her and what she was going through and tried to portray it. Thanks to your comment I feel as if maybe I got my message across right
    May 5th, 2014 at 12:25am
  • chasingdaisies;

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    Holy cow, that was amazing. You are definitely going to receive a recommendation on this story. That felt so real, it was ridiculous. Actually.. It kind of made me feel like you were able to step into my mother's shoes. Not that I actually knew what she was going through, because I watched from afar, but what I heard and seen reminds me very much of this story.
    I never watched her do drugs, or have sex, but I imagine this might be what it was like for them when they were alone. This is an amazing piece of literature.
    May 4th, 2014 at 07:10pm