A Rhapsody of Sorts - Comments

  • let me go.

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    @ writing_wrongs
    Thank you so much! Arms
    That's a great question, and there isn't really an answer to it at this point in the story. I mean, there's no story behind the house in terms of that he's not living in some terrifying haunted house or anything, but he hates it anyway. He's never lived on his own before so that can be pretty scary in itself. Maybe Rose is right and he just needs to get used to it? Sorry that this is a vague answer to your question, but I'd rather let everything unfold so that you can decide for yourself why you think he hates his house. Thanks for being an awesome reader!
    July 5th, 2014 at 08:36am
  • writing_wrongs

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    I love this story so much. Is there a story behind why Harry doesn't like his house? Or is it just the whole being alone thing?
    July 5th, 2014 at 07:34am
  • forever_hustler

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    ughhhh i really really loved this chapter!! i'm really happy that rose is letting harry in finally, even if it's only a bit!
    June 29th, 2014 at 06:32am
  • AyooBeautiful

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    The matthew mystery is driving me crazy! Need to know what happens next
    June 26th, 2014 at 10:19am
  • finallymoving.

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    What could be less bad... Maybe Harry's arms around her or her leaving in his car?! Can't wait for more!
    June 26th, 2014 at 06:35am
  • writing_wrongs

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    I don't want matthew to be gone :( it makes me sad. I really like this story because Oliver is her own character apart from Harry
    June 26th, 2014 at 03:22am
  • epicninjachica

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    Ahh I love Gio and I wanna know what Harrys plan is!!

    Wonderful as always
    June 25th, 2014 at 09:38pm
  • legacy .

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    Goodness this is so great. The confrontation between Oliver and Fox was written perfectly; I find it's not often that confrontations are written well and are actually relevant to the story, but this completely was. I hope Oliver soon starts to open up to Harry; as much as I love seeing a relationship develop over time, I'm also really impatient. Perfect update!
    June 25th, 2014 at 09:33pm
  • epicninjachica

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    Wonderful as always. I love their friendship ahhh
    June 21st, 2014 at 11:46pm
  • legacy .

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    I stumbled across this the other day and I absolutely love it. I love the character of Oliver Rose; it's so difficult to find good, well-written and captivating fiction in this site sometimes, but I'm so glad that I found this one. I'm so glad that this is prewritten. I don't think I could handle the wait if you were writing it as you went! :)
    June 18th, 2014 at 11:50am
  • iWearConverse

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    This story is so captivating, my mind is swarming with a bunch of possibilities of what happened with Matthew and you just describe the emotions so well. Amazing story, and amazing writing!
    June 12th, 2014 at 09:42pm
  • epicninjachica

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    I just read this all in one sitting and I love it
    June 12th, 2014 at 01:28am
  • finallymoving.

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    Wow, I'm really curious about what happened with Matthew now! And to see how she and Harry will be after their fight. Can't wait for more!
    June 5th, 2014 at 06:03pm
  • crazy.sexy.cool

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    This is so well-written. I'm excited to see what happens next and am curious as to what occurred between Rose and Matthew....(:
    May 30th, 2014 at 09:32pm
  • finallymoving.

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    I really like this story! Can't wait to see where it goes (:
    May 15th, 2014 at 06:49am
  • TheBestIsYetToComexx

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    I like this! Hope you update soon :)
    May 10th, 2014 at 11:05pm
  • BlueEyedSymphony

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    I like this a lot :)
    May 9th, 2014 at 02:20am