Okay, I'm all caught up now and my only critique is that in the last chapter, you called Lila Lola and I was wondering what the dog was doing in a bar for a second. But other than that, I'm completely in love! I can't wait to see where this goes!
I Just finished the first installment and I'm HOOKED! I love the way Garrett describes Avery, clearly he's attracted to her, but he also knows she's an asshole. I LOVE IT!
Oooh, it looks like Garret is something a bit different for her. I love how she reacts to him. ^.^ Im looking forward to reading more, thanks for updating!
No problem. I do it all the time!