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  • AliMeansWings

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    @ ImtheDoctor
    No problem. I do it all the time! Mr. Green
    June 6th, 2016 at 08:56pm
  • ImtheDoctor

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    @ AliMeansWings
    OH yikes! I never even noticed! Thanks for pointing that out to me!
    June 6th, 2016 at 07:09am
  • AliMeansWings

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    Okay, I'm all caught up now and my only critique is that in the last chapter, you called Lila Lola and I was wondering what the dog was doing in a bar for a second. But other than that, I'm completely in love! I can't wait to see where this goes!
    June 5th, 2016 at 02:53am
  • AliMeansWings

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    I Just finished the first installment and I'm HOOKED! I love the way Garrett describes Avery, clearly he's attracted to her, but he also knows she's an asshole. I LOVE IT!
    June 5th, 2016 at 02:27am
  • hiscalidarlin

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    Girl continue this! I dig it so hard!
    April 6th, 2015 at 04:40pm
  • katiexlee

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    I'm really liking this story so far!
    May 26th, 2014 at 06:45am
  • trulyyours

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    I'm really interested I like it so far. I want to see where Grant and her go. Looking forward to more.! Very Happy
    May 25th, 2014 at 06:01am
  • NaiveDove

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    Oooh, it looks like Garret is something a bit different for her. I love how she reacts to him. ^.^ Im looking forward to reading more, thanks for updating!
    May 17th, 2014 at 02:16pm
  • NaiveDove

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    This story looks...really, really interesting. Im looking forward to read more of it! Its crazy you haven't gotten any comments yet! Mr. Green
    May 10th, 2014 at 12:56pm