@ ewthatscute aghh thank you. i don't want her to be too angsty but i also don't want her to be too fluffy. but it makes me feel 100% better that she actually sounds real omg thank you so much :D
I absolutely LOVE Devin's as a main character, trust me. She sounds like a person I genuinely know and I'm so glad you aren't fluffing her up and just writing her as a real, believable person.
I am in love with your story- theres not a lot of good 5sos fanfics but I can tell this is deffinetly going to be one of them!!!!!!! ps I am still stuck on his purple black hair too