July 13th, 2014 at 07:57pm
I have to admit that I'm not familiar with this fan fiction, so I'm glad that I can read it as kind of original fiction. It has a very interesting charm about it that I really like.
I love the way you started it. It really pulled me into the story and made me want to read more instantly. I love it when a story does that. I don't have to read through a slow uninteresting beginning.
I really like Beau's introduction. It is very adorable. Just thought I would say that.
The description in the story is really well put in. Th e description of the backstory with her boyfriend and brother is very interesting and very well done.
Anyways, this is amazing even though I'm not familiar with the fandom. It's still wonderfully written and very interesting.
I love the way you started it. It really pulled me into the story and made me want to read more instantly. I love it when a story does that. I don't have to read through a slow uninteresting beginning.
I really like Beau's introduction. It is very adorable. Just thought I would say that.
The description in the story is really well put in. Th e description of the backstory with her boyfriend and brother is very interesting and very well done.
Anyways, this is amazing even though I'm not familiar with the fandom. It's still wonderfully written and very interesting.