Far Too Young to Die - Comments

  • sirensong

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    You just killed me with feelings holy shit
    This is incredible!
    June 26th, 2014 at 09:31am
  • LEdFullmetalkid

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    Aww this was adorable.

    I thought the story was very well written; the plot line was great and there was enough detail.
    It was just a bit hard to read cause the text was kinda like written all together. (If that made any sense)

    Loved it anyway!
    May 28th, 2014 at 06:29pm
  • piercethemayfire

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    @ safe bet.
    I'm in the middle of chemistry class reading this on my phone. I'm all smiley and I probably look insane but thank you. I really do appreciate longer comments and I like knowing that all 6.8k+ words didn't go to sh*t
    May 6th, 2014 at 04:31pm
  • silent hearts.

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    Please, do not be sorry for this. It was one of the most beautiful and sincere things I've read in a long time. Particularly the last third or so. I was kind of worried that it was going to end with the whole falling in love with a hero thing, but you didn't do that. You did so much better. The characterization on this piece is really incredible. Even your background characters, like Vic's family and the boys' respective roommates were developed and easy to understand and picture. The scenery and description you include is also very appealing and well executed. Seriously, you did a great job with this and you should be proud. :)
    May 6th, 2014 at 01:10pm
  • Indie_Pixie

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    This is just beautiful
    Giving one all the strength to want to live again.
    On the contrary, don't be sorry love.
    You are so talented.
    This was the best
    You made my night love :3
    May 6th, 2014 at 07:30am