Holy hell... This has everything, a completely new and unheard of idea, bratt, sexy teasing brian, god like comparisons... So so much. I absolutely love this, really hoping there's more to it! :D
oh my! i'm with rach! it was def. worth the wait! and man, do I hope that you'll write more of this one brian being such a tease, helen being sent away for asking questions and then wham bam! brian took her side of the bed moahahah! hothothot!