Twenty-Three - Comments

@ ace merrill.

MUAH.

I'm so obsessed with E3, but it's so hard to find anything about them. Especially here I've read the same like...two stories a hundred times.

Thank you! I am such a sucker for fluff.

Oh my goodness, this is the first E3 story I've opened the first chapter to.

And gosh... I'm such a sucker for these cheesy stuff. I teared up when Annie was talking to Wes, about not wanting to lose Keaton. And I had chills all over my body during her speech, adoaljda it was uber cute. I felt so bad for Keaton when she "rejected" him. I was hoping that she would crawl into bed with him and hold him, and she did!! Yay.

I have no idea who this Keaton guy is but it makes me think that he mibba doesn't provide a big variety on fanfics of him, plus there isn't a large fan base, which is an absolute pity. I truly wished it did, because turning this into a story would be so beautiful and wonderful! From here on, you could flashback to how they met and things as such and ahhhh it'd be so nice!

I'm glad you decided to join the contest just in time because you're the perfect winner. I JUST LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS!! (I'm mad crazy about punctuation and grammar, and I've just added an extra exclamation mark, that's just how much I love it).

The way you started, display the texts and the reactions we all get when reading texts from people we love, it was so real. The way this is about liking someone older, which is something I can relate to so much, you've no idea. This is just love seen from a complete different perspective and I adore it!

A Keaton story? You are my favorite person. My god!!