The Island - Comments

Oh man, I can't believe it's over. I like how you did the second ending. And honestly, I don't think anyone who has ever been a castaway has ever really been able to fit back into society the same way, you captured that awkwardness perfectly. Also, I'm glad you did two endings, I loved them both! This whole story has been something I've looked forward to reading. Great job and keep on writing!

Can't wait to read it! If you have any other stories I'd love to read those too

This story is amazing, and really well-written.

Oh God I really thought Niki died when she supposedly jumped off the cliff... Then wakes up on the plane with everyone, best ending I could possibly think of. I can't wait to read the alternative one, I love your writing style, keep writing!

@ NLA3998
Oh yeah, I'll read them both! XD Can't wait!

@ NLA3998
Oh yeah, I'll read them both! XD Can't wait!

@ WhereMyDemonsHide
Thank you! Europe was great! You'll have a choice for which ending you like better but I hope you'll read both! I'll have a lot of free time now so updates shouldn't take more than a week or so!

I hope you had fun in Europe! this chapter was like... Oh my God I can't even describe it. Definately the last thing I was expecting O.O and now I can't wait to find out what happens next, it's like... Wow. Excellent job!

@ WhereMyDemonsHide
Thank you so much for your ongoing support! It means so much to me as a writer! I'm having trouble sharing the story with people though. It would really help if you could share it with your friends! I'm working on chapter 15 and hopefully it will be up soon!

I dont even know what to say. Hopefully they do find a way off the island. And it's so cool to see that they forgave Devin. Love this story, update soon!

Holy crow, Devin is alive???? And it's just them three now, wow I wonder how they will escape. A excellent cliffhanger

@ WhereMyDemonsHide
Thank you so much and I will definitely keep updating. I have more chapters in the works. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. This is my first story. Please don't forget to share it with your friends :)

I'm just getting into this story and I've got to say that everything about it is amazing. It doesn't get too mushy and lovey dovey. The descriptions of death are actually quite impressive. The feeling of hopelessness and no escape are defiantly here giving the story a nice claustrophobic feel to it. I love the feeling with the story. Your style of writing is really stunning and very descriptive. The long chapters and everything is really nice. And oddly, I really liked Vanessa as a character even though she didn't live very long. I just lovethis story a lot, keep updating!