Revolution - Comments

Great ending, you tied everything up really well. If you post the Nano2014 one I'll be reading it.

wonderful! excellent ending! im v happy w all the outcomes.

I've been so busy with Uni that I haven't been able to comment. But your story is still the only thing that I visiy mibba for now. It's been amazing, and on to greater things for you now! <3

Please Please more Rasia and Rygaard

I want so much more. I love them and they are so cute even when Nathaniel is feeling bad about things and Rasia has to whip him back to shape. Keep writing. Many of us love this story and will stick with it until the end!

We want more! We want more!

I still haven't had my fill of Rasia and Rygaard so... Please bring your ideas to life. (:

more???

Holy Crapola. What a great set of updates

I loved the quick update! One chapter rasia at death the next Nathaniel? Ugh! I have to know what happens! Don't let them die!

yaaaaas. one copy already sold to this gurl!

I love this story, and have been trying to encourage you to keep going, because I was so into it for a while. I know you are busy, but woth honesty I admit that the long breaks inbetween what I would consider to be the most climatic part of the series has definitely thrown off my rhythm with the story. I couldn't get into the chapter posted today as much, simply because I hadn't read or thought about it in a while.

I am not sure if that is a problem for anyone else, it might just be me. I know for a while I was checking mibba regularly to see if this specific story had been updated. So I only admit the little disappointment because I really love this story, and want to leave you happy encouraging comments.

The last chapter was awesome. That was a pretty dramatic turn of events, and kudos to Rasia for being able to hold her own in such a difficult decision. I kind of feel like I might know that she is going to live, but it would be super crazy if you threw in a monkey wrench like her dad being the one that stopped Nate from killing her or something.

You'll know what to do! You know these characters so well. Anyway, I hope your new job is going well. Your writing hasn't faltered, so don't be too critical of yourself. :-)

I was literally crying by the end of the chapter because it was so worth the wait, but I also can't wait for the next chapter because I want to know what happens with everyone and how the fight turns out and whether Nathaniel gets his stuff together and realizes he might have just killed Rasia. I was so excited about this chapter and am even more excited about the chapters to come. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter!!

This chapter was so worth the wait! I'm going to cry if you don't updafe soon. Your an amazing writer! This should seriously be a book. I would buy it. Update soon please!

very excited as we come up on the end of the story, but I'm becoming impatient. can't wait to see what happens next!

Yay! (Not about what is happening to Ryygard but that you updated!!) I wonder I like what codikins5 said, and agree with it. I don't think he knows how strong Rasia is. Can't wait to read more! Congrats on the job.

Also,congrats on the job! :D

I think Rasia will end up being Nate's hope instead of his weakness.

I check this everyday hoping to see a new chapter! I am all riled up after the last chapter. What kind of plan will Rasia come up with to use her knife? The suspence!

Oh goodness! I am so hooked on this! I just went back and read the other two parts of the series. Living in Maine myself, loving revolution and loving the supernatural, I am completely in love with this. Please post soon! This is too much anticipation! Wonderful writing