Revolution - Comments

This is so EXCITING. I haven't commented much but this is just so EXCITING. :D Looking forward, but not in a way that would stress you out yeah?

got chills reading this one, but the dark cloud has begun to hover.. i hope you don't plan on killing off nathaniel..

I'm so happy you updated:) oh oh wow her dad! I'm excited to see how it all plays out...l

It is really interesting watching the change in Rasia. She has become such an adult in what feels like barely any time at all. I guess what they go through would cause that.
Keep it up! I check back every day. I have a hard time remembering these are characters and not real people, though.

The flow of this chapter reminds me how Rasia is hardening.

The flow of this chapter reminds me how Rasia is hardening.

I know you don't expect any comments for this chapter but I think it was necessary. I love any update from you!

@ Call_me_Dot
Thank you!
I'm glad you said that, makes me feel better about it! I'm not sure why I don't like it either, but you made me feel better about it!

I loved this chapter idk why you think it's bad! Its so real and no frills and the writing was memorizing

Oh god!!! You made me cry. My heart is breaking. :( :

Oh, well. There goes my heart.

WHOO! I think it's great that you didn't let any drama wash over this little episode between Rasia and Nathaniel. It's nice to know that they're cool. hehe, love your one shots btw

I love the normalcy of.simply.being human or part anyway lol having moments like that with amanda or just each other is a sweet reminder of the things they are fighting for I love it

So, I haven't commented on this story of Ras and Nate in a while, but I have been reading every chapter with the enthusiasm of a little kid at christmas. This chapter was one of the best because it showed a dynamic that Amanda has for Rasia that we do not see in Ras' point of view and that makes it so special. And Nathaniel needed to hear the speech from the parental figure at some point in his time with Rasia, so I'm glad that happened. Even despite all the pain going around in the story, the fact that these two still have a strong bond is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter.

@ jarnie
Fixed. Thank you for pointing it out! Not sure how I managed that one.

..hey the chapters are labelled funky.

I'LL READ WHATEVER YOUR WRITE. So excited!!!

omg. I can't wait for everyone to join the revolution and more stories about their excursions! as for one shots though, I'd love some throwbacks to titianna's with rygard and ras sneaking around/dating/practicing. I miss the simplicity and the appeal of taboo relationship.

I would love to read some one shots ! And I feel like even though this chapter is in rasias pov itb really connects how similar her and Nathaniel are. Love it. As always!

One shots would be amazing!! :D And Rasia...holy crap when she was all "Thanks for the consultation" I was like OHHHH SNAPPP that's the badass Rasia I always knew she could be ^.^ (Oh and I bet that Rygaard was seriously wanting to kill that vampire that smacked her booty) XD