Captured Beauty - Comments

mrsmshadz (100)

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Oh man another good story!!! I'm hoping you update your stories and soon!! I miss them and you!!

July 27th, 2015 at 07:48am

Greenwolf7 (100)

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Love this so much, she is such a badass fighter please update soon xxxxx

May 23rd, 2014 at 04:48pm

Metalwhore (100)

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Thanks so much, this story is asdfghj awesome!
Update soon!

May 23rd, 2014 at 09:22am

Greenwolf7 (100)

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Yes loved this so much and wow shadows got beat by a girl haha I loved this please update soon xxxx

May 23rd, 2014 at 07:30am

NikkiFoxy8 (100)

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Thank you for the new update! Please update soon!

May 23rd, 2014 at 05:15am

Lalaster (150)

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@ NikkiFoxy8

@ Metalwhore

@ HerNameIsAlice

@ Synical

Thank you all so much for reading and commenting.

May 23rd, 2014 at 04:39am

RavenArtist93 (250)

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well well well, isn't she a fighter ;D
I really love this story!
It's going to turn out amazing!
I'm so anxious now O.o
What a badass hot bitch she is...like hot dayum!
lol :D

May 23rd, 2014 at 04:38am

CountSynula (100)

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Well that second chapter didn't disappoint! I love this story lol. Hope you don't mind but I will be a constant commenter.

May 10th, 2014 at 06:25pm

HerNameIsAlice (100)

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She sounds fucking hot, haha!

May 8th, 2014 at 08:58pm

Metalwhore (100)

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Love this!!!

May 8th, 2014 at 06:19pm

NikkiFoxy8 (100)

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Keep it going! Update soon!

May 8th, 2014 at 06:13pm

Lalaster (150)

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@ TaylerVengenz

@ NikkiFoxy8

@ RavenArtist93

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@ Synical
Thank you all so much!
I'm very excited right now. :)
I'm trying to make this different than the rest of it's kind. :)

May 8th, 2014 at 07:33am

vagabond; (100)

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I love this!
Please update soon :)

May 8th, 2014 at 06:17am

NikkiFoxy8 (100)

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I love it already! Update soon!

May 8th, 2014 at 03:41am

RavenArtist93 (250)

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Damn.
This is intense and rather sinister.
I love it! :D
I feel bad for that girl though, even when she cheated on him.
I mean yeah she's a damn lazy bitch but dear god, no reason to threaten a gun to her head and dump her ass in the middle of nowhere.
Especially when the feelings were low to the start...like shit D:

I'm curious to what will happen next ;)
Keep going :D

May 7th, 2014 at 11:21pm

HerNameIsAlice (100)

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I hope the girl he finds is a biiiitch, haha!

May 7th, 2014 at 08:11pm

Greenwolf7 (100)

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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON I love this so much and can't wait for another chapter xxx

May 7th, 2014 at 04:41pm

CountSynula (100)

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My goodness! I'm in love with this story. Omg. It has finally excited me. I've been having a rough time finding stories I like lately but this has renewed my hope.

I love that you refer to them by their stage names. It gives the story that rough edge. I enjoy your lovely use of detail. Describing the fountain, car and trees was enjoyable to read. I really hope you continue this. The plot has me enthralled.

May 7th, 2014 at 04:02pm