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  • Blood Splatter

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    I can look over your work. I didn't see many errors but maybe contact a beta on the sight?

    I love this by the way.
    May 19th, 2014 at 02:40am
  • Already:Dead

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    @ RayTorosArmy

    Haha I can't promise it won't make you cry, my writing skills can be pretty awful at times, but the storyline won't make you cry!

    I know the song deals with miscarriage but the story is happy in the end.

    Thanks for commenting :)
    May 8th, 2014 at 02:38pm
  • RayTorosArmy

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    can you promise that this fic isnt going to make me cry, i've never heard the song or know what it's about but you said it was sad so now im nervous
    May 8th, 2014 at 11:46am