And It Rained - Comments

This was very sad yet beautiful in some way. I really love this story because even though it describes the sad event of witnessing a departure like this it also describes the love and care the husband had for his wife until the very end. Just knowing that she was sick and he did everything to make her happy was lovely and sweet. This was very well written and I think you did an amazing job writing it. If you wanted to convey sadness, beauty and sweetness I believe you did with this one shot. To be honest I had a few tears run down my face when I read the way he started calling out for her in desperation knowing that she was gone but he did not want to believe it.
Good job writing it.

Your story is NC17, I don't like to read anything like that. Aw well, this was still a lovely story!

@ discoveringclouds
Well, I have another story I have posted called Nude, but it's not completely finished yet, but if you'd like to read the first chapter you're welcome to!
I'm also working on another work, so if you'd like to keep an eye on my mibba, I should have it posted soon uwu

Oh dear that's quite sad. Thanks for explaining!
Do you have other works you would recommend that I read?

@ discoveringclouds
A hospice is a place that you take people who know they are about to die so they can be made as comfortable as possible, kinda like a last resort that's cheaper than a hospital.

Ah gosh, thank you so much! I appreciate the love, and I'm really glad you liked it!

SubhanAllah what a sad story. It's so heart wrenching and well written. It's simple, yet it travels the hidden worries we have.
One thing though, what's a hosipice? Do you mean hospital or something else?
Keep writing!