He's Mine - Comments

  • rotten girl

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    Oh, I just love this. I love how raw and personal it is. She’s trying to be strong and brave, but it hurts. And I love how your story embodies her pain. I also really, really love the fact that the chapters are journal entries. And Juju crying against the lockers made my heart all mushy. And this was just great.
    January 6th, 2016 at 08:25am
  • yurio

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    I really like this. You should definitely keep it up.
    May 23rd, 2014 at 04:37pm
  • Writerwoman

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    I think you should keep going
    May 11th, 2014 at 05:47pm