Love - Comments

@ safe bet.
Thank you so much for your comment, it was my first on this site. I am truly grateful for what you said, makes me want to write more. I have many more Ville and Bam fics that haven't made it on here yet. And the Willa was on purpose-lol Again thank you so much for the comment and i am glad that you enjoyed it.

Oh goodness. I was so excited when I saw the title Love and that it was a Bam/Ville fic but then you broke my heart. Ahh, it was excellent writing though. Just one quick thing - in the dialogue between the two of them I think Ville auto-corrected to Willa when you were typing this. Just so you know. Otherwise though, this was perfect. It's very difficult to write something, especially of this caliber, with hardly any dialogue, because you have to do such detailed description. That was no problem for you though; your focuses on the senses and imagery were particularly great in this story. Overall, although this was horribly sad, it was incredibly well-written!