The Hummingbird - Comments

Ohh! I wonder how much significance the fancy guest is going to have in all of this, she seems like she's got a part to play.

I'm glad they're working things out and not failing at this en-devour.

Ohh, that ending though ;)

Another excellent update :)

It's nice to see some friction between Vivian and Delilah about the way things are going to be done around the cafe. It's great that you captured that because so often friends end up having little fights and disagreements when they go into business together and all other stories seem to gloss over them, it's refreshing to see that you guys are still breaking the norm with this story.

I am a little nervous for them about inspection, especially with the mother coming along as well. I hope they are ready.

It's so nice to see more of the boys aswell, I feel like they are going to be great plot points down the line for all of the girls. I'm sad that Christian is being driven to slave labor, damn that Mr Harris and his boxes! Haha.

I can't wait to read more, keep up this pacing, although it may seem like you're going slow, your not and it would be a shame to see it skip over the little things, there's a lot of attention to detail in this story, and you guy's are doing a seriously awesome job. Keep at the relaxed pace! Can't wait to read more!

This story is coming along very nicely. c:
I like it a lot. ^-^
I was highly amused by the argument/heated discussion over the maid outfit thing, ahah. Personally, I'd say no to those outfits. Not everyone would appreciate them. xD haha.
I can't wait to see where this goes next. ^-^

Yay more new characters! ^.^ I'm really liking the pace you guys are taking this story, you arent jumping miles ahead, it's really refreshing. That maid's outfit is absolutely killer by the way, so much better than I envisioned it to be :D

Keep it up guys. Oh, side note, is it alright if I write a blog for this story? I just really like it and I'd really like to let people know it's here and it's awesome!

Ahaha I loved Christian trying to make out like he talks to girls, that's so him!

My favourites are Viv and Del, I mean seriously, they are like real chicks! I love how they can snap from being serious to taking the piss out of each other in five seconds flat - it's real yaknow? :D

You guys are doing so great with this honestly! Hummingbird is finally open and I can't wait!

Excellent chapter guys, seriously! I love Blake's character, him and Christian get on so well it seems, well, as well as guys can get on ;) Haha.

I am a little worried about how Vivian and Delilah are going to be able to cope with all of this stuff they have to do, it seems like an impossible task! You guys have done a brilliant job of making the character real and giving the whole story an air of realism about it, there's nothing fake here and it's awesome. I'm finally reading a story that I came here to read!

Naw thanks for the plug at the bottom ^.^ I'm so proud right now, Haha.

This story is amazing so far! The first chapter is super well written, from its extremely detailed sentences to its realistic paragraphs. The first chapter really drew me in and made me want to read more. The layout is super cute and I love the colorful flowers in the picture. It gave me a good idea to what the Hummingbird Inn flowers looked like. I like where this is headed, so great job guys and keep up the good work!
The only thing I would change is the font size. I had to zoom in a bit to read the chapters. Other than that, I love this and I'm looking forward to the next update!

This is very unique. I really like what you guys have going on. Creating your own world and such. I also like the fact that you are letting other Mibbians create characters to add to your story. Very nice, indeed.

I am quite intrigued by this story. I think I am going to subscribe just so I can see where you guys are going to take it. I am also going to recommend it. I am sure you guys do not mind, haha.

I can not wait for more. (:

I love the way you two write together, it flows very nicely! I can't wait for the next update! definite reccommend! :)

This is really good and unique and wow. I like the town name Silverlea is interesting xD

I can't believe I missed the updates.

OH MY GOD!! This sounds so interesting already. And I like how Vivian and Delilah just go straight to business.

I can't wait to read more!!!

ARGH!!!! MY CHRISTIAN!! Haha, That is exactly the type of way he would answer the phone too xD You've totally captured my main man! Team Christian! Haha.

Okay, seriously though, I love this. I love that they are gonna have their own set roles but still share things, it seems like there's a hella lot of work to be done!

Update Soon, I'm too excited

PS: Love the whole authors note aswell with the "Sulky Bastard belongs to me; Jordy" xD

^.^

God I love the feel of this story, it's really excellent! You guys are doing a great job :D I can't wait for more

OH MY GOD! An update! Yes yes yes! Finally the Hummingbird Hill is open for business!

Can't wait to read more

Can't wait to see where y'all take this :)

Okay, I'm officially intrigued!

Its normal to be superexcited about the beginning of a story you contributed a character to, right?

Especially such a wonderfully written one.

Ah! This is sooo exciting!!

Ooohhh. This looks like it's going to be awesome! I can't wait for the next update ^-^