Little Black Bird - Comments

@ x.X.PurpleStorm.X.x
Thanks! Yeah as I've gone on I've realized there isn't much clarification about that. I think I'm going to edit a chapter that seems like it will fit to, to explain Brein.

This seems like a good start to an interesting story. I'll definitely be keeping up with it to see what happens. I like the characters so far and you have spent a good amount of time developing them. However, there are a few details that are a bit confusing (like the relationship with the wolf, Brein). I think some details in the first few chapters woukd help with clarification a lot!

This seems like a pretty good story. Gonna bookmark it! I hope you post more soon.