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  • zeldachick14

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    Update plz! And i know that this takes place in the uk but billie is american, so when u write when he's talking make sure he is not saying words that he would normally not say like whilst.
    September 30th, 2014 at 02:33am
  • charmishgirl

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    I love it! Although one thing that bugged me while reading was that you had a bunch of grammar errors. There was one paragraph where you meant to use "you're" but you used "your." I know, I'm a grammar nazi. It would make reading the story slightly smoother for me to read. Other than that, your story is pretty good.
    August 11th, 2014 at 03:28pm
  • I Blame Genetics

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    A rather bittersweet chapter :/ I love it tho Wink you should check out my stories, working on multiple Billie ones and on the third installation of my trilogy Seventeen and Strung Out on Confusion. There's been a lack of comments lately, I'd love to hear your thoughts Mr. Green
    July 23rd, 2014 at 03:57am
  • whatername12

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    Great new chapters I felt like I have been waiting an eternity! :)
    July 22nd, 2014 at 09:22pm
  • Whatshername86

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    Hi @ whatername12 - Thanks for the heads up about the duplicate part of the story, I have since deleted it. Glad you liked the update. Keep your comments coming :)
    July 22nd, 2014 at 02:12pm
  • whatername12

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    Thank you for the update it was funny. Update soon. Also question why did you repeat yourself??
    July 21st, 2014 at 10:56pm
  • whatername12

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    Thank you for the update it was funny. Update soon. Also question why did you repeat yourself??
    July 21st, 2014 at 10:56pm
  • whatername12

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    Update ok I now it has only been a couple hours but this story is great
    June 14th, 2014 at 03:51am
  • whatername12

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    Update ok I now it has only been a couple hours but this story is great
    June 14th, 2014 at 03:51am
  • whatername12

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    Update ok I now it has only been a couple hours but this story is great
    June 14th, 2014 at 03:51am
  • imnot_edible

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    Nice story!
    They're a couple of whores aren't they? ;)
    Keep up the good work!
    June 13th, 2014 at 09:31pm
  • whatername12

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    This is great I really love it
    June 12th, 2014 at 04:07pm
  • Whatshername86

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    @ I Blame Genetics
    Thank you so much for comments, you've made me really begin to think about how their relationship will develop. Very Happy
    June 3rd, 2014 at 05:43pm
  • Whatshername86

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    Thank you all for your kind comments. I've just updated the story with chapter 8 and its another steamy one.

    Enjoy

    As always please comment.
    June 3rd, 2014 at 05:42pm
  • whatername12

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    Great
    May 29th, 2014 at 02:00am
  • whatername12

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    Greatp
    May 29th, 2014 at 01:59am
  • I Blame Genetics

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    Ok, you write amazing sex scenes. On top of that, I'm really excited to see how their relationship develops so update soon please!
    May 28th, 2014 at 09:25pm
  • cmdiva

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    Naughty: Smoke:
    May 27th, 2014 at 11:55pm
  • LKBJA

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    WOOOHOOO ALL THE WAY!
    May 27th, 2014 at 11:05pm
  • chelsea_dagger

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    I love it!
    The last chapter was great ;)..
    Can't wait for more :)
    May 27th, 2014 at 08:56pm
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