Hopes Up High - Comments

This story is amazingly written, the detail you've put into it creates a clear picture for the reader, and everything flows great. I didn't spot any major errors, that stuck out or stopped me from reading... I like the realness of it... you can tell that you've put a load of work into this to get to a place where your readers are left amazed and wanting more... great job :)

I don't know really know anything about hockey, but if anything, that actually makes it easier for me to sympathise with Kendra, since she had no idea who Sidney was either.

But I have to say - this story is genuinely amazing. It's so well written and gripping! Your descriptive skills are excellent, and I could clearly visualise the characters in their settings which is a massive plus for me. Chapter 3 was, in my opinion, your best chapter. The way you built up suspense was incredible, and I actually jumped myself when there was a noise on top of the car, and it only turned out to be Declan. You really did fool me into thinking that something seriously bad was going to happen! Good job, hehe!

The amount of research you've done for this story is evident in the first chapter. It's clear that you know what you're talking about with all the police abbreviations, and it makes the story feel real. Well-researched stories are gems!

This is a great story you have here. I'm definitely recommending it!

Has a slightly creepy vibe, but good story so far. Hope you update soon

He's so lucky she didn't fire at him.

Sincerely freaked me out, I jumped when she spotted the note. So good!

Happy to see this updated!!!

Great job : ) Weird though wonder who it was

Glad you finally updated!! :)

Ohhh. Like this already!! <3

hmm

Cliffhanger.............!

Can't wait for more!

Ooh, this seems like my type of story! I actually remember reading about it somewhere, probably in your blog but anyway, this is really good and I'm definitely subscribing!

Amazing! I'm glad to see you went through with this story idea/plot line Your knowledge that you must have gotten from your dad on police enforcement makes the story seem so professional and realistic. I love it.

Can't wait to see how Sidney reacts when he gets to talk with Taylor~

uh oh

I'm hooked!!

Love it! Please u p date soon!

So. I love this! This is well written! Keep up the good work and I cannot wait for the next update! :)

dear goodness, you were right about that gif. o.o