wowsers. like, actually super duper wowsers. this is possibly the best Kellic I've read in a while (and I've read a lot, trust me XD). please update soon! <3
Non sense, your chapter is great! It was really hot, but then Kellin's abandonment (YES HE'S ABANDONED! Poor thing...) at the end... I was like "yay" and then "nooo! whyyy"
What are you talking about woman, this is the best chapter yet! ;) felt a little sad for kellin at the end though... But keep them coming this was great x
This shit is fucking hot, its fucking great, the kind of erotic excitement we all love to read. Though it is kind of hard reading on a bus and not being turned on and having to hide it!!! Great job though, I fucking love it, please update and write many other great stories.
I absolutely love this fic!! Please keep writing! (Also I apologize for not commenting on the last chapter. It was beautiful and I felt all warm and fuzzy inside)