UnderCover SEAL - Comments

my kind of story. I like it so far

aawe making love under the waterfall.. now that sounds amazing
hehehe she got upset- well i hope heather is right about the reason for blake being mad.. it'd be a little bit too soon i think for them to have a baby already since they've moved so fast to begin with
good that adam is crossed off the list of suspects- still not sure about max..

yeah, set up jack and heather >_< you don't happen to have a photo of him like you do the others?? *wink*
uuh.. max.. dunno but that text that he want to meet up 'cos he gotta tell her something feels a little off to me..
and the creeper got her number.. hmmmmmmmmm... lovin this mystery

weehey i thought for sure that steve would blow up- but i guess he had other things on his mind right then to actually think about what hunter told him and hunter were the one to get the pics- i actually thought that the creeper would send them to steve bahahah! i'm watching you.. yeah we can see that >_< and the pic of steve and blake.. yeah that might've been to confirm that they're related- and or it could be some kind of proof- like if the creeper was hired/working for someone to proove that he's ''made contact'' with the target.. having too much fun with this story like you can prob. see

ah dude that was hot! hunter's sex on legs
ooh man someone trashed her place? O.o uuh oh!

oooh man..!! you are killing me here..
eek! a creeper creepin' on 'em getting down and dirty.. O.o

CBH?? naah that's totally the wrong team.. it should be NYR hehehe (and not just because they've got a swedish goalie.. lmao)

aawe willy.. sounds so cute! ooh she's finally going to be able to go out with them on rescue missions, that's awesome!
can't blame heather for giving a flirty smile at hunter though..

heheheh hot scene in the shower
i really do like george.. i like that hunter now got someone else close that knows his secret..
and aawe athena likes him!

that chapter was just so sweet! and so far they've both kept the nicknames

aawe.. he feels bad now for keeping secrets- no wonder when she told him that more or less horror story.. it'd be bad if he tells steve about it though since he isn't supposed to know..
but damn i like hunter and blake together

aawes poor hunter- not knowing if it was truly his dad or not..
and then hoooooot! they KISSED!! woop!!
wooah thought, hold up one sek!
please tell me that she doesn't really remember that night she was thinking about because she was drunk off her ass and not like drugged or something.. since kari could fill her in with some stuff.. and that the guy didn't force her.. O.o coz if he did- i want steve to know and for him and hunter to find that douche

GREAT STORY CANT WAIT FOR MORE

aawe poor guy! his dad was captured and might be alive and might not..
ya know I just keep thinking about Hawaii Five-O all the time while reading this (is it inspired a bit by it perhaps? )
heh if i were blake i'd sit as close to hunter on that bike too with a tight grip

muscles.. hahah i like kari
dimples, sexy bod, tattoos.. a bike.. well hello there hunter >_< heheh
funny how they both can't stop having dirty thoughts..
and yeah- what would steve say?

hah, wildcat! he better keep that little nickname for her- if he doesn't come up with something better
and max, the jealous little guy.. well setting his eyes on hunter, no wonder why he looked like a kicked puppy

hahah aaawe max and kari hitting it off from start.. that's cute! ooh is it hunter she tripped over??

hah, awe poor Hunter, it's not going to be an easy job for him by the sounds of it all

soooo I usually don't read original stories- fan fic girl haha- but I dunno the name of this story caught my eye and the summary sounded good so I thought, why the hell not?
and so far I really like it