So I read the other two installments to this story. I was thinking it was done, but then I went to your profile and saw you had this up! Perhaps you could connect it with the other two stories so people can find it? The beginning's kind of rough, some grammatical stuff going on, and kind of confusing with where the other one left off... like it seemed like Jack was going to end up with her, not Alex. Not that I am complaining though. I am team Alex for this story, aha. But it's just kind of odd how Jack ended up back with Holly. But I'm just commenting to let you know if you choose to continue this, I will be here, because I enjoyed the first two stories so I would definitely love to read this. :) I really hope she ends up with Alex. :)
April 14th, 2015 at 06:27am
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The beginning's kind of rough, some grammatical stuff going on, and kind of confusing with where the other one left off... like it seemed like Jack was going to end up with her, not Alex. Not that I am complaining though. I am team Alex for this story, aha.
But it's just kind of odd how Jack ended up back with Holly.
But I'm just commenting to let you know if you choose to continue this, I will be here, because I enjoyed the first two stories so I would definitely love to read this. :)
I really hope she ends up with Alex. :)