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  • princewentz

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    I died and went to heaven. Finally. Finally! They so totally like each other and it's so adorable because they tried so hard to fight it. I'm praying that they start being nice to each other in front of everyone because they're too stinking cute together to not be known amongst their friends.
    September 11th, 2014 at 07:15am
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    So I had a lot of catching up to do (like 5 chapters haha) and so much has happened! Zoe and Garrett's back and forth/frenemy relationship is giving me whiplash. One minute they're fine and then the next they're about to kill each other. It's exhausting.

    Poor John. I thought he was just being flirty with Brooklyn, but obviously the poor boy had feelings for her. But, if he needs someone to take his mind off her I volunteer myself as tribute hahaha
    September 10th, 2014 at 02:37am
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    Hello! I'd just like to say that I'm looking forward to the next update and the Zoe and Garrett hangout thing yes (because number 1 otp)
    September 6th, 2014 at 05:30am
  • princewentz

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    Oh god, I hope John isn't going to start being a manwhore... I feel like that will just cause a whole mess of problems... But I am so relieved that Zoe & Garrett are being civil! They're so cute when the aren't at each other's throats.
    September 4th, 2014 at 03:55am
  • dreamingyouhere

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    I forgot to comment last chapter. Sorry. :( however, it was one of my favorite. The pair being all sweet to each other is obviously my favorite. Ok now to this chapter! what's John planning? I'm now in edge. It can't be good. And, can Garrett just go ahead and admit that he likes her? Because it's obvious he does and he's just being a stupid boy and instead of telling her, he'd rather fight about it!

    Anyways. Love this story and you guys. Can't wait for the next update. :)
    September 4th, 2014 at 03:54am
  • dreamingyouhere

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    Ah I loved this chapter! I mean, it was sad but Garrett being all sweet and stuff...I think he's starting to warm up to her! Now if they could actually be nice to each other for a whole day! One step at a time...
    August 22nd, 2014 at 04:27am
  • princewentz

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    Don't worry about the nickname! :) and let me just say that I am sobbing. I absolutely love how you tied so much in on this chapter. So much makes sense. Absolutely stunning chapter. Cannot wait for the next :)
    August 21st, 2014 at 06:09am
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    August 21st, 2014 at 06:08am
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    August 21st, 2014 at 06:06am
  • princewentz

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    My Zoe/Garrett feels are insane right now. He needs to be sweet to her more often because they're adorable as heck together.
    August 15th, 2014 at 05:40am
  • dreamingyouhere

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    GARRETT JUST STOP BEING A DOUCHE FOR ONCE!!!

    I think instead of his jerky comments hurting her she should just start smacking him. That's all. But, I don't think you guys want this to become an abusive story so don't take my advice...
    August 7th, 2014 at 06:35am
  • princewentz

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    Aww, Zoe! I feel for you girl. I am really anxious to see what's behind her whole badass persona. Wonderful update! Can't wait for the next :)
    August 7th, 2014 at 01:59am
  • princewentz

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    They're getting along :D And I seriously think that the blanket is Zoe's, maybe I'm way off but there's no harm in hoping! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next :)
    August 1st, 2014 at 01:37pm
  • princewentz

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    Okay, so they're both battling demons. We're more aware of Garrett's, but now I'm even more curious about Zoe's past. It's getting fairly obvious through their distaste of each other that there's a strong possibility of something being there. Maybe Garrett reminds Zoe of someone from her past? I dunno, but I loved the nerdy space talk :3 Wonderful update! Very excited for the next, as usual. Updates are the highlight of my week ;)
    July 24th, 2014 at 01:52am
  • sunsoakedseason

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    I like them getting friendly with each other. And I don't really want them to go back to "war mode" again, but I think it'll be like that again soon. :( But keep it up because I really really want to read more!
    July 23rd, 2014 at 12:21pm
  • dreamingyouhere

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    How did I miss last chapter?! Anyways, I'm caught up now! And ugh, can't they just be friends already? It ended all friendly and yet I know it won't last...my hopes are high though!
    July 23rd, 2014 at 07:00am
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    Okay, so after seeing The Maine twice on Warped and discovering that I have a bit of a crush on Garrett, I had to finally read this. And simply put, I absolutely adore it! The writing is phenomenal and the characters are solid. I'm loving the air of mystery and how each chapter chips away a bit more at that said mystery. I'm very much so looking forward to the next update! Wonderful read thus far!!!
    July 18th, 2014 at 05:20pm
  • dreamingyouhere

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    So wait! He never even had a relationship with that girl?! For some reason that makes it even better. Can't wait for the next chapter!
    July 11th, 2014 at 04:12am
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    for my date, we didn't get any new songs but it was so much fun! i actually got a little good downtime with the guys instead of being rushed at their daily signings thanks to my lovely friend but it was fun!!! halvo and i ended up running into each other a lot cause we watched a lot of the same sets through out the day via side stage but i hope you have/had fun at your warped date!!! i forgot how dirty you get after it's all over hahaha.
    July 4th, 2014 at 04:48am
  • recycledsweaters

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    my brain is like a million other places lately, but finally commenting.

    why do i actually like cranky/mean garrett? does this say something about me? hahaha. oh but zoe has got it all wrong with garrett, i think the boy doesn't have elitism, he's just misunderstood haha. they both need to "play nice" with one another. hahaha can't wait to see how this pans out.
    July 4th, 2014 at 04:35am