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  • Dreamuser

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    This one-shot was...well, divine, basically :D I loved it. Plus, it was really long, which I loved even more. This is basically a mid-length story. So yeah. Love it.
    August 27th, 2016 at 09:48pm
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ kickthepj
    eep, thank you! i'm glad you like it!
    November 25th, 2014 at 06:53am
  • kickthepj

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    this is so so so incredible like this i think the most incredible fic ever i just. um. i wanna cry but in a happy way?? yet also sad bc it's oVER but yeah i can't even explain how amazing this is, it's so good. so, so good. cries.
    November 25th, 2014 at 06:50am
  • hottestchocolate

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    there are happy tears in my eyes oh god this is adorable!! thank you for writing it!
    October 31st, 2014 at 03:10pm
  • Wave789

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    It's 6am right now but im still awake because i was going through your stories
    a bit earlier (or later really since it's the wee hours of the morning XD) and realised that for some reason i hadn't read this one yet, then refused to sleep until i finished it :P this was worth being terribly tired at work today because it was absolutely perfect and adorable and fantastic, i loved how well Jack's emotions where described and how you could feel him slipping away from his old ways and falling deeper in love with Alex Mr. Green
    July 6th, 2014 at 10:50am
  • p.......

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    holy shit, that was perfect
    June 27th, 2014 at 06:19am
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    holy shit, that was perfect
    June 27th, 2014 at 06:19am
  • sarabethg99

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    omg this was great your writing never disappoints me
    May 28th, 2014 at 01:07pm
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ PlenaLoonyLuna
    ye silving lining's taking a while; i'm trying to figure out how to end it in the 16th chapter without making the next chapter 60 billion words long
    May 28th, 2014 at 07:32am
  • glowcloud.

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    awh i love this a lot. i really like how you wrote their personalities c:

    i almost forgive you for putting me into silver lining withdrawal
    May 28th, 2014 at 07:29am
  • jackthebonerking

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    THIS WAS SO GOOD I'M UPSET
    May 25th, 2014 at 06:03am
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ thanksforjackbarakat
    I'm glad; I was a little worried I'd made it too fast! :D
    May 24th, 2014 at 06:56pm
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ RomanticHeartbreaker
    Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
    May 24th, 2014 at 06:56pm
  • jagksexual

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    The pace of this was perfect
    May 24th, 2014 at 06:31pm
  • rmeij

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    You're my one of my favourite authors y'know (btw i read this in the middle of the night and i still live with my parents so i can get in trouble for this but you and your stories are worth it ok) love you, love this (crazy long but it's amazing so it's okay) story, thank you so so so much for writing it
    May 24th, 2014 at 06:18pm
  • Rhiernern

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    This is amazing, I can't even begin to explain <33
    May 24th, 2014 at 04:25pm
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ fioleeandjalex5ever2
    Aw, thanks lovely! I'm glad you liked it!
    May 24th, 2014 at 02:47am
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    I'm fine wth constructive criticism but not when it's not constructive???? Idk what's up with you but you've never given criticism like that before and if I make something like that for a reason then I should be able to explain myself without having to get defensive????
    Also I'm perfectly aware that not everything I do or think is correct like goddamn I'm not that self centered
    I wouldn't have minded the criticism if it hadn't been stated in a way that made me sound stupid
    May 24th, 2014 at 01:51am
  • fioleeandjalex5ever2

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    this was so cute ! <3 I love how you wrote Alex , nerdy Alex is an awesome Alex.
    May 23rd, 2014 at 10:45pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    oh, so you can't take negative critism?? might wanna work on that. happens a lot in the real world.
    wow interpretation?? you mean the thing they teach is different for everyone?? are you trying to say that my interpretation is wrong?? p sure they also teach that there is no right.
    excuse me for bringing up things that i feel are valid points--something they teach in english too, imagine that
    news flash: most writers want questions and thoughts to be brought up, whether they conflict with what the writer thinks or not
    huh guess that's a big no-no with you, isn't it
    bc everything you think and do is right, bc only your interpretation and understanding of a thing is important
    oh no i wouldn't wanna be rude to someone who's being and be a hypocrite
    right excuse me i forgot that it's always about you and how you feel pardon excusez-moi.
    May 23rd, 2014 at 08:15pm