This one-shot was...well, divine, basically :D I loved it. Plus, it was really long, which I loved even more. This is basically a mid-length story. So yeah. Love it.
this is so so so incredible like this i think the most incredible fic ever i just. um. i wanna cry but in a happy way?? yet also sad bc it's oVER but yeah i can't even explain how amazing this is, it's so good. so, so good. cries.
It's 6am right now but im still awake because i was going through your stories a bit earlier (or later really since it's the wee hours of the morning XD) and realised that for some reason i hadn't read this one yet, then refused to sleep until i finished it :P this was worth being terribly tired at work today because it was absolutely perfect and adorable and fantastic, i loved how well Jack's emotions where described and how you could feel him slipping away from his old ways and falling deeper in love with Alex
@ PlenaLoonyLuna ye silving lining's taking a while; i'm trying to figure out how to end it in the 16th chapter without making the next chapter 60 billion words long
You're my one of my favourite authors y'know (btw i read this in the middle of the night and i still live with my parents so i can get in trouble for this but you and your stories are worth it ok) love you, love this (crazy long but it's amazing so it's okay) story, thank you so so so much for writing it
@ JamieAllOver. I'm fine wth constructive criticism but not when it's not constructive???? Idk what's up with you but you've never given criticism like that before and if I make something like that for a reason then I should be able to explain myself without having to get defensive???? Also I'm perfectly aware that not everything I do or think is correct like goddamn I'm not that self centered I wouldn't have minded the criticism if it hadn't been stated in a way that made me sound stupid
oh, so you can't take negative critism?? might wanna work on that. happens a lot in the real world. wow interpretation?? you mean the thing they teach is different for everyone?? are you trying to say that my interpretation is wrong?? p sure they also teach that there is no right. excuse me for bringing up things that i feel are valid points--something they teach in english too, imagine that news flash: most writers want questions and thoughts to be brought up, whether they conflict with what the writer thinks or not huh guess that's a big no-no with you, isn't it bc everything you think and do is right, bc only your interpretation and understanding of a thing is important oh no i wouldn't wanna be rude to someone who's being and be a hypocrite right excuse me i forgot that it's always about you and how you feel pardon excusez-moi.