This totally gave me the chills. I love how you wrote about something that happens so often, but turned it into something that either rarely or doesn't happen at all. The idea that angels come in all forms seems very subtle and prominent here at the same time. I think it would be interesting to read about the younger man from this drabble (:
"Don't worry, sir."His voice was the sheer embodiment of serenity.There's a space missing between "sir" and "his"
"Don't worry, sir."His voice was the sheer embodiment of serenity. There's a space missing between "sir" and "his"