Little Spoon - Comments

Goodness, your writing is beautiful. It flows so well, and is so cute.
I love the paragraph where Cas goes through what is now important to him and his little fears and so on. It was funny and adorable. It's been so long since I've seen Supernatural (and then I've only seen up to about half of season two, a small number of random episodes on TV, and a whole lot of gifs on Tumblr), but from what I know of Castiel you've captured him pretty well.
If there's any mistakes, I did not pick up on them. It's very well-written and so easy to read. Pretty much everything has been done just right, and though I've not really seen Cas in Supernatural yet, this makes me love him. Definitely recommending.

Double, sorry.

So I haven't seen much of Supernatural. But from what I have seen, you have captured perfectly in the charters. Everything was written perfectly! I found myself lost in your words. The ending was so freaking cute! I loved how they end up sleeping together, and that they find comfort in each other. I just gushed with a big fat "awww". I can's wait for the second part! Maybe something else will go down.

Or you will just give more cuteness. I recommended and subscribed!

I have to admit I like the way you essentially listed a selection of things that Cas now finds important, but you didn't make it come across as a boring list that dragged on. It's a good sized paragraph, and it's informative and humorous, so well done. And likewise for the following paragraph, with references to supernatural beings and then comparing them to the flu because they're now in the same league for Cas was just another great way of conveying how out of place he is with these new circumstances. I think that makes it all the more believable that Cas would repeatedly cross the line and sneak into bed to cuddle up with the Winchesters.

Describing Cas as a lost puppy was so accurate

The ending with Dean held a nice amount of sweetness in it. Despite the personal handshake situation that had just finished, the desire for affection and Cas's nervousness came together nicely and gave the chapter such a cute conclusion. It was pleasing to see that Cas's frustrations, as described earlier, were finally soothed and that it was by Dean.

Your writing has such a nice flow to it, I found it difficult to stop reading so I could type out a comment Though the style was different to what I'm used to (such as the way you utilised brackets frequently), it still worked. The flow wasn't hindered at all and the story just pulled me and didn't let go.

For the title, I feel like Locked Out of Heaven would have been cheesy (though since this was only part one of two, perhaps part two would make that title seem more appropriate?). I feel like Little Spoon is a cute title that summarises the story perfectly, and I can't really imagine this piece being called anything else! So in case you couldn't tell, I enjoyed reading this piece and if you are going to post a part two I'd like to read it

Ok, I am officially in love with this. I love Supernatural and I love Cas and this story, oh my god, is just perfect. I literally have nothing bad to say about this except that it ended and desperately need more.

Everything about this just screams Cas. I could totally see him trying to get sleep with Sam or Dean. The narration is so great-- I seriously got sucked into this story so easily and could not read this fast enough. I'm guessing there was a little True Blood reference with the maenad? I was reading and was thinking that sounds so familiar and then I remembered Maryanne.

I think you did a fantastic job bringing up all of Cas's worries now that he is human and it really is stuff that people don't even question or really think about, but of course this is all new to Cas and you conveyed it all perfectly.

And that ending. So cute. Oh my goodness. And I don't think the title is cheesy! It is also super cute. I love this so much, in case you haven't figured it out yet.

I seriously hope there is more.

This is the first time I have read something Supernatural with Castiel being the main character and in his human form no less. I guess I can understand and see why someone who has always had no need for sleep or has always has brothers and sisters in his life that he couldn’t sleep alone. I know from personal experience that now that I’ve done it, it’s sometimes difficult to do so. You have a really creative and interesting take and I can’t wait for the next chapter. The only mistake I can think would be in this would probably be a spelling mistake. Subscribing and recommending! Keep up the awesome work!

This is the first time I have read something Supernatural with Castiel being the main character and in his human form no less. I guess I can understand and see why someone who has always had no need for sleep or has always has brothers and sisters in his life that he couldn’t sleep alone. I know from personal experience that now that I’ve done it, it’s sometimes difficult to do so. You have a really creative and interesting take and I can’t wait for the next chapter. The only mistake I can think would be in this would probably be a spelling mistake. Subscribing and recommending! Keep up the awesome work!

This is seriously one of my favorite stories on here. I came back to reread it. You write so beautifully, and this is so cute. I love it. I can't wait to read more.

This was so cute! I loved it.

I haven't read a lot of Supernatural fanfics with Cas as human, but I love that he's so adorable and cuddly here. Just thought of tiny Cas cuddling up to the Moose is almost too cute to bear.

I love that you showed how vulnerable Cas feels as a human. I can understand someone who was once so powerful feeling so weak now that they don't have their grace anymore. I mean, to go from being a vengeful angel to a puny human, that has to be a big change and it hard to deal with.

I liked that Sam didn't really care about Cas sleeping with him. Like, he gets that it's kind of weird but he's okay with it - and I think it shows how far Cas and Sam have come as friends.

It's so like Dean to be kind of freaked out by it, but then it's also so like Dean to be understanding and sympathetic to friend going through a rough time. As tough as Dean and Cas's relationship is, I like to believe that Dean would allow Cas in his bed if he was feeling so crappy.

I also like that you put in that bit about maenads! I don't know if they were in Supernatural, but I do remember some maenads from True Blood and the sex frenzy they can create. I thought that was a cool way to finally get Dean and Cas together.

I'm not sure if I'm a true Destiel believe yet, but I thought they were really cute in this and I'm looking forward to the next part.