My Heart Spell - Comments

@ tentail
Ok. :3

@ Z Loan
For some reason I can't read the words on my end, so if things get a little screwy, it's just me trying to fix so can see the words myself.

@ tentail
Much better! Thank you and sure will, now all I have to do is wait for more chapters. :D!

@ Z Loan
Yeah sure, no problem glad to help. I changed the layout if you want to check it out. Hope you can see it better, if you got anymore questions, just let me know.

@ tentail
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/543613/Yes-My-Lord/
Thank you for your time on my story and thank you for explaining me the "bug thing" , it is a more romantic and cute way. :3
Thank you once again!

@ tentail
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/543613/Yes-My-Lord/
Thank you for your time on my story and thank you for explaining me the "bug thing" , it is a more romantic and cute way. :3
Thank you once again!

@ Z Loan
Yeah sorry about the words, I'm working on my layout on a lot of my stories right now, because of the colors of the lettering. The reason he is a bug, is because of what he did in his past, the reason I didn't turn him into a werewolf or anything like that, is because I felt like it was played out. So I thought, why not make him something else, something smaller, so he can see things from another point of view of things. Sort like seeing the little man being stepped on if you will.

Yeah I'll check out your work. What is it called?

I understand that you’ve started writing this story based on Beauty and The Beast, just with a modern touch and big different details. From this I agree that you have a great plot and good characters.
I just don’t understand why is he a bug?
If it’s a Beauty and The Beast story why is he a bug and not a werewolf or a beast?
Probably we will notice this as the story goes on, I won’t bug you with this too much.
Your layout sends me a warm feeling, but the writing in pink makes it harder to read, that’s my own opinion, you don’t have to change anything it’s your work not mine.
In the end I just want to say that you have an amazing story and I can’t wait to read some more, good work you have here and I am waiting for more. Keep up the good work.
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This has nothing to do with your story. I just want to ask if you have time to try my story, if not this wouldn’t change my way of seeing your story and I will wait for more chapters. Thank you!

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
I'll try to keep it update as best as I can

This seems really interesting so far. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this.