Together Let's... - Comments

Ah, okay. It's been such a long time since I looked at the first chapter, so I didn't know where exactly you told us, the readers, about this idea. But thank you.

@ Don'tFearTheReaper
very first authors note has the answer to your question, m'amour
can't tell you how i found it bc it was well over two years ago by now, but yee

I absolutely love this list thingy you have going on. Did something inspire you, like a Tumblr post? Or did you come up with this?

haha, okay. If they don't melt, and just transition, then that might actually taste good... It's kind of like the bartenders who make rainbow shots almost.

@ Don'tFearTheReaper
okay, i can kind of understand the pineapple thing then i'm not too big a fan of the taste unless its the actual fruit but still
you'd be surprised
they actually don't mix together until they start melting, so it's kinda like just transitioning from flavor to flavor. if you plan it out well enough, there aren't problems.
i really want one now

Well, as I'm allergic to pineapple... It still doesn't sound good... Coca-Cola and cotton candy... I wouldn't think that tasted good together... Also, I think I just accidentally replied to myself, I'm so stupid, lol

@ Don'tFearTheReaper
what no omg mixing everything all up is like the greatest thing ever

That kiss though. I agree with Alex; that just sounds so disgusting. I love this story. It's so cute and I just want someone who will do this with me too. Except that kiss. Just ew.

Sorry for posting twice as well.

Christmas Gift Swap!

I'm not familiar with the characters, but I love the idea that they are going to do such a cute list. I only read the first chapter, but I thought it was quirky and witty. I saw no grammar or spelling errors, hurray!

If I was familiar with the people you chose to write the story about, I would love to continue. Honestly, I will be reading a few more chapters just to see how they will react to certain things in this Together Let's list.

I wish I could have said more, but keep up the good work! Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!

Christmas Gift Swap!

I'm not familiar with the characters, but I love the idea that they are going to do such a cute list. I only read the first chapter, but I thought it was quirky and witty. I saw no grammar or spelling errors, hurray!

If I was familiar with the people you chose to write the story about, I would love to continue. Honestly, I will be reading a few more chapters just to see how they will react to certain things in this Together Let's list.

I love the fact that they made a fort. Forts are so awesome. The characters actually feel like they have certain roles because of their ages. It's like a little bit of a older sibling younger sibling relationship feel to it, which makes it cute and realistic.

I wish I could have said more, but keep up the good work! Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!

@ xMareBear14x
aw u stop :*

@ jagklex
AND IT, YOU, M'AMOUR

I'VE MISSED THIS

I swear, you always write the cutest couples ever. Like, I have heart eyes for this.

@ southpaw
Ah, thank you, darling! I always forget how much I actually like this fic. Then again, all of my best writing (in my opinion) is the fluff, so I guess it isn't that surprising that I love how this has turned out thus far. I just wish I had more time to work on it. The good thing is that it's not too terribly long, so whenever I get around to it again I'll be able to skim through so that I don't leave anything out or write them differently than they have been.

Oh man, this is already shaping up to be on the same cuteness level as Baby, Just Hold On! From the getgo, their relationship feels real and loving, and I liked that you included a little friction in the first chapter; it adds to the realism. And the mac n’ cheese fight! So adorable and funny. God, you have a good knack for keeping things positive while still being realistic, which is just the thing a lot of stories miss out on. I liked the kissing in the rain chapter, mostly because of the banter between them, another awesome part of your writing. I had to laugh a bit at Jack’s reaction to having to watch The Vow, but by the end of the chapter I was laughing even more at the fact that he was biting back tears. XD Overall, I love the lightheartedness in this story, awesome job!

@ JamieAllOver.
I want my oatmeal1!!!!!1!!

@ jagkbaralex
well i mean
some people do prefer the fangled electronic gadgets

@ JamieAllOver.
Is that a new fangled electronic gadget? Kids these days.

@ jagkbaralex
don't u know how lesbian sex works