Insomnia - Comments

@ silent hearts.

Thank you so much! I've found these like mini CreepyPasta's a while ago and one of them inspired this story. I might do some more like this :') Do a mini series or something.

This is really interesting! The horror theme draws people in very well, it's intense but not in an overwhelming kind of way. The application of his insomnia to a whole new problem is also quite unique. I like how unlike most stories, it doesn't really draw to a definite close. You never really figure out what's wrong with the tower, or just with Tony. It's very interesting to see something new like that. The idea that not even Jarvis knows what it is going on sends chills down your spine. Your writing style, sort of inside Tony's head, is also very good. Great piece overall, I'd love to read more!