Ever Dream - Comments

@ rachthebat.
I'm glad you like it so far. :)

And as far as who has Sia goes... :D You'll have to wait and see! Next chapter should be up soon!

Finally got some time to read this! :D

I love the banner, it's perfect! :D The picture of the girl is beautiful. I'm getting a fantastical vibe from it. Quick question, how did you get that sparkly picture as the background behind the banner? It looks gorgeous!

Ah, I love it already! You really should write third person more often, you're really good at it :)

Poor guys. It must be tough for her father, having to try to bring up his daughter without her mother, and still try to keep his own feelings in check. I can see why he would want to coddle her, she is all he has left now. But Sia is right, to an extent. He cannot keep her locked away, that will only push her further from him. But maybe she could go a lot easier on him, too. He is only trying to look out for her.

Oh my god, who has Sia?! It was very intense! I liked it! :D Poor man. First his wife leaves, now his daughter. I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

@ LaDeDanielle

@ Alex Moore.
Thank you both for your comments, I'm glad you like it! :D

COMMENT SWAP:
I loved the sentence: she was very smart and that made her all the more miserable. I think you are right. Not that I would ever swap my wits for anything, but blessed are the clueless. You sketch a very vivid picture of who Sia is and where she lives and who she lives with. It is informative but keeps me wanting more too.

Good job!

It's great that you're venturing out and trying new writing styles! I actually like third person and wish I were better at it than I am. But I like how you've written this. Don't forget to allow the reader to know the characters thoughts and feelings too. Any who I really like the story, its different from what I expected from the song/summary lyrics. Keep it up!

It's great that you're venturing out and trying new writing styles! I actually like third person and wish I were better at it than I am. But I like how you've written this. Don't forget to allow the reader to know the characters thoughts and feelings too. Any who I really like the story, its different from what I expected from the song/summary lyrics. Keep it up!

@ Frozen December Moon
I'm gald you like it so far! :D

I hate that there are no comments. I really like this story and can't wait to see how it goes.

I hate that there are no comments. I really like this story and can't wait to see how it goes.