Your summary is insanely good. Not only do you set up for a drastic turn in comparison with other fanfics, but it seems there's going to be interesting details that people have never explored, per your character page. I love the banner as well; the best I've seen so far. I'm sad there's only a prologue...
But, just as I expected, your prologue is perfect! You give details as to the creation of Hogwarts, which is really good in case you have readers who aren't fans. And the way you set up the few seconds of the Voldemort vs Potter standoff is very well done; very well. I do hope you'll return to this because I honestly think this could have gone (and still can) far! I wish you weren't so intimidated, because you are immensely talented! (And half the entrants dropped out, dear.) I'm curious as to what the deal is with the Cacodemon. On the edge of my seat, really, so I'll be crossing my fingers for your return to this~ Winners will be announced soon so keep an eye out xo
But, just as I expected, your prologue is perfect! You give details as to the creation of Hogwarts, which is really good in case you have readers who aren't fans. And the way you set up the few seconds of the Voldemort vs Potter standoff is very well done; very well. I do hope you'll return to this because I honestly think this could have gone (and still can) far! I wish you weren't so intimidated, because you are immensely talented! (And half the entrants dropped out, dear.) I'm curious as to what the deal is with the Cacodemon. On the edge of my seat, really, so I'll be crossing my fingers for your return to this~ Winners will be announced soon so keep an eye out xo