Mockingbird - Comments

Brilliant insight. Written well. What more could a reader ask. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

I am just really excited to read a story that is fan fiction about Sansa and Petyr.

I am just really excited to read a story that is fan fiction about Sansa and Petyr.

You have, without a doubt, captured the features and personality of Sansa Sark in the best way possible. I felt as if I was reading a small passage from George's Books and that's saying something.

I look forward to read more of this, I love the grammar and the mystery that comes with this single chapter. You have captured my attention without a shadow of a doubt, dear.

Please try and upload soon, this has great potential, I must admit and tip my hat to you, lovely.

Keep up the wonderful work and I shall see you on tour next chapter!

xxxx

Can we just take a moment to adore that gorgeous banner? Like, seriously. It's beautiful. So jealous

"Wits, beauty and an important name. Those would become her armour." - Love it.
I feel like with that line, and with many others in this piece, you've really captured that part of Sansa and the journey she's come on so far.

I think the ending was just absolutely perfect. It truly pulled it all together and I got a sense of hope from Sansa, which was really great. It proves just how much of a fighter she is. Fantastic job!
(I wish I had more to say, but it was so wonderful and I can't critique anything, really )