I absolutely loved this! Wonderful plot, wonderful writing, wonderful story. Fluff was perfect for this adorable story - adding smut may have taken away from the overall warm and fuzzy feeling of the story.
This was seriously one of the cutest one-shots I've ever read in my life, girl. Your descriptions were utterly fantastic, and I was able to picture everything so perfectly. The emotions that went through Jon and Bri, I could feel them, man. It was deep. I loved it.
I really could read this over again like, a trillion times because of how adorable and well-written it was. Honestly, the fluff was enough and I think that maybe the smut would have ruined the mood the story had going for it the entire time, so I'm glad it was excluded... (although that doesn't mean it should be forgotten about forever Perhaps there can be another one-shot specifically for that? hahahah!)
But overall, brilliant job, girl. It totally lifted my spirits from being down over the Hawks' loss.