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  • AppleEnt

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    I absolutely loved this! Wonderful plot, wonderful writing, wonderful story. Fluff was perfect for this adorable story - adding smut may have taken away from the overall warm and fuzzy feeling of the story.
    June 24th, 2014 at 12:17am
  • Phenax

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    :D Love the rest of it as much as I loved the firs. :D

    Wonderful. Absolutely fantastic. :)

    I love this. :3
    June 6th, 2014 at 06:19pm
  • Phenax

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    :D Love the rest of it as much as I loved the firs. :D

    Wonderful. Absolutely fantastic. :)

    I love this. :3
    June 6th, 2014 at 06:18pm
  • Thatmom

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    This was a great one shot!!! I'd love to see it develop into more:)
    June 6th, 2014 at 02:17pm
  • villa rosie

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    This was seriously one of the cutest one-shots I've ever read in my life, girl. Swoon Your descriptions were utterly fantastic, and I was able to picture everything so perfectly. The emotions that went through Jon and Bri, I could feel them, man. It was deep. I loved it.

    I really could read this over again like, a trillion times because of how adorable and well-written it was. Honestly, the fluff was enough and I think that maybe the smut would have ruined the mood the story had going for it the entire time, so I'm glad it was excluded... (although that doesn't mean it should be forgotten about forever tehe Perhaps there can be another one-shot specifically for that? hahahah!)

    But overall, brilliant job, girl. Arms It totally lifted my spirits from being down over the Hawks' loss.
    June 6th, 2014 at 04:41am