The Chronicles of Airegoth and the Beast That Mourns - Comments

  • chasingdaisies;

    chasingdaisies; (120)

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    I feel like this could be something really great.. You have an amazing imagination, coming up with something like that. But I could barely stand to read it where some of it wasn't in paragraph form. Also, I felt like some of it didn't make any sense. As for your grammatical errors and things like that, you can message a story editor and they'll help you out.
    June 4th, 2014 at 06:26pm