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Ah I see. Hopefully you update again and soon!

@ mrsmshadz
I know I'm sorry its just I'm uodating from my phone lol

Too short!!

I completely understand! I'll just patiently wait!

@ mrsmshadz
I promise I will try and update ASAP, I've just been going through a lot. I only have my phone to update and it's very hard. I have no cable or wifi to update from my computer.

Please for the love that is M. Shadows please update!!!! Damn cliffhanger!!!!!

Chapter 13, Ryan knows exactly where she's at so???? Didn't get to finish reading the last time. Lol

Ch 2 was that a flash back in the middle of the story??? Was confusing!!

Ch 1. How could she wear tight tiny shorts and a tank and be able to hide her bruises?? She must not have very many.

Gahhh what a tease! Matt better kick Beth to the curb lol. And he better stop being all like "just helping a friend." Grrrr. I'm gonna spank him. But Ryan! Ugh how dare he burn her house down.

I usually don't read much stories that show that much emotion in abuse and you described it perfectly. I love your writing style and how the words flow. And the sex scene was I find it hard to write them well and this is just, slow clap. Good job!

This is really good, your writing style is awesome, and although there are a few small mistakes throughout it doesn't hinder the reader in anyway... your description is good, and everything flows great... all in all an amazing story :)

SWEET JESUS! I LOVE MATT SEX SCENES. This was hot. Beth needs to take a hike lol.

Good update. I hate those stupid cops. They didn't do anything when he broke into her house. I'm glad that Matt and Ava finally had sex though. With the sex scene I would say to elaborate much more and make it longer and more descriptive. It was too quick maybe add in a little foreplay. We all sucked at writing sex scenes I was terrible but practice made it better, and reading other peoples work as well.

I wanna know who this Beth is. >.>

Newwww addictionnnnnnn :)

Matt wasn't just working
He clearly was also spending time with Ryan
Ryan did have a point, Matt knows what happened between the pair yet he's still hanging around Ryan over looking everything
That begs two questions
How much other stuff does Matt over look?
Can Ava trully trust Matt?

OMG! That spicy scene between her and Matt was hot but such a tease! I wanted them to hump lol. And Ryan seriously needs to piss off! I'm tired of him. LOL. He needs to accept it's over and move the heck on.

I like this story. It has been a long time, since I've read a story based on abuse. From the beginning of it I could feel her pain It' so true when we don't know who a person really is until they reach out their true colors. I think it was great how you were able to describe in details everything that she is going through emotionally and physically. It gives the reader a prospective on to actually feel her pain and put in her shoes. You had managed to use vivid imagery which is great in order for a reader to keep reading. There were a few grammatically errors but nothing that stopped me from reading. The theme of abuse is very sensible and sometimes it is hard for people to read or write about it but I believe that these type of stories are more of an attention getter since it describes things that can easily happen to anyone, specially women.

You managed to make me hate Ryan with a passion. He is bad news. He has not only the nerve to do that to his wife but also to every women he had cheated with. It's obvious that he is sick, and he deserves to be put in jail for it. Matt is a sweetheart and it is obvious that he cares. She deserves some good in her life.

I can't wait to read where this goes. I have my own bits of predicted conclusions in my head and that's how amazing the plot is to me.

Keep up the good work. xD

Poor Ava
Hearing that your husband has been cheating your entire relationship must have been a blow
Things were just getting steamy
God damn Brian and his unwanted presence
Wonder how psychotic Ryan is going to go when he gets served with divorce papers
What was up with the doors being locked when they are never locked?