May I Have This Dance? - Comments

i'm so excited for chapter three (is there a reason it says it's already up with the sub-title but it's not showing or)

but yeah chapter two was awesome NOW THERE'S A CHALLENGE but c'mon alex you're gay right and jack's hot let him seduce you and then accidentally fall in love with you (((and the way he fucks u)))

@ wtf_barakat
Yeah I can read all of the 4 chapters

@ sowrongitshayley
omf im glad you like it. um okay so on my computer its not showing any of the story? so like is it working for you as of rn?

Omg????????? I'm so happy right now aaah and it's not moving too fast at all I love it! They should make out in the car haha please update soon xx

@ jalex_barakarth3012
omg thanks bae i got new chaps for youuuu

@ Morrwon
yay well you got your wish bc i just updated 2 new chapters so have fun with that bb

This made me smile! Can't wait for a new chapter!

aw, this looks like it's gonna be super cute! can't wait for another update!

@ wtf_barakat
omg it's okay

@ macaokala
muchas gracias <333

@ brxndneweyes
when you commented i may or may not have yelled okay i love your stories so much i just snjhukhf but thanks bb ily

@ JamieAllOver.
its comin along bb i pray to god for fast updates

This is hilarious, I can't wait for more.

This first chapter is really funny, i can tell it's gonna be a great fic! Keep up the good work :)

what the hEck i need the rest like rn

@ sowrongitshayley
yay omg im glad you like it <3 im writing chap 2 rn c:

Omg please for the love of god finish this story and don't drop it halfway through like everyone else. this is excellent I love it! I saw the promt on atff and fell in love with it so please update asap your writing is amazing :)