Someone Wake Me Up - Comments

Comment swap: Poor Tony, what a cruel way to lose your father. You could elaborate on his feelings some more, or maybe memories he has about living with his dad. That would give us a better sense of what their relationship was and such. I do love the way the issue number is the combination of the safe, nice find. Just keep writing and as Grasshopper. already mentioned its probably a lay out thing that is keep ing people from reading and its a shame!

This is a pretty sad one-shot. I didn't imagine that it was going to end like this when I started to read it. Poor Tony. What I could suggest for this story would be to maybe add a little more detail, it seems so rushed from beginning to end and there could have been so much more to the story. Also, a reason this story might not be getting that much reads is because it has no layout. Mibba is full of layout addicts who really will click off a story because of it's lack of a layout. Other than that, I don't see why it's not getting read. The idea is great and it has plenty of potential. I personally enjoyed it. (:

So I'm just gonna have to curl up in a ball and cry because this hurt my feelings in all the best of ways. Especially the ending. The ending just tore me up, like ow. Poor Tony, baby, oh my gosh, that's horrific and this was painful and so great and a million claps for you.