Burn Bright - Comments

This story is beautifully written. Absolutely incredible. <3

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Just wanted to say thank you for commenting guys! So sorry I didn't respond earlier, but I read and appreciated the comments, so thank you!

I only skimmed this because I'm busy atm but wow hunny. The amount of detail you put into this is truly amazing. I have such a visual image of this in my head and hot damn it's hot but at the same time... Feeling. You really got their connection written out perfectly and I am really jealous of your writing.

I love this.

Congratulations for writing this story. I love it.

I have tears in my eyes because of the last paragraph aaaah.
This was exactly what I was looking for to read. I love one shots when you can get so many emotions cramped into a single chapter and yet make it sound amazing. I love how it was written, it had such a good flow (I usually skip parts but with this I couldn't) and I loved the idea. I also loved how it reminded me of Brokeback Mountain because wow, that movie. And wow, this story. I loved it.

This was so amazing. There was so much detail put in. You build your characters so much for the readers and so well which I think is really hard to do in just a one-shot. Like I said on your other story, the way you detail things is so unique. Your vocabulary is amazing. Your writing flows so well. I usually can't take super long paragraphs, but the longest paragraph in here didn't even seem that long, honestly. It was just such an easy read!

This was honestly incredible. I can't even put into words how much I love this.